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The ocean habitat is important to our lives. It provides us with food, medicine, and many other important resources. What is an ocean habitat? Well, an ocean is a large body of saltwater. And a habitat is a natural home to a plant, animal, or other organism. The ocean habitat has a very large variety of life. The ocean has many food chains due to its large number of species. Oceans are most known for its high salinity. Salinity is how much salt is in the ocean. There is a large amount of salt in these large bodies of water. However, saltwater is not safe for us to drink too much of. There are many different habitats in this world. They all are very sacred to our world and animals and humans couldn’t live without habitats! In this essay, you will find out information about ocean habitats and my project.



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  1. bicentenaries says:

    “Oceans habitat is important to our lives. It provides us with food, medicine, and many other important resources. What is an ocean habitat? Well, an ocean is a large body of saltwater and a habitat is a natural home to a plant, animal, or other organism. The ocean habitat has a very large variety of life. Also, the ocean has many food chains due to its large number of species. An ocean is most known for its high salinity. There is a large amount of salt in these large bodies of water, but saltwater is not safe for us to drink too much of. A variety of different habitats exist in this world and they all are very sacred to our world. Animals and humans couldn’t live without habitats! In this essay, you will find out information about ocean habitats and my project.”I erased the description of salinity because it is not needed, everyone at a higher level than 6th grade should know what salinity is. I changed the starting of some sentences because in a good paragraph, no two sentences should start with the same word. You need to make your sentences more complex because right now you are just using a couple of words and putting a period. This is something teachers look for when grading a paper.Those are the changes I would make to it, and I think you could add more to it.