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Cell phonesNowadays, everybody has a cell phone and arranges a lot of affairs with that. On the other hand some scientific reports advice people to use cell phone less and correctly. This device has some advantages and disadvantages in modern living.This device has a lot of advantages that people can use that in their daily affairs. In spite of useful and on time calls like emergency call, everybody can use other accessories that every cell phone set has like camera. In addition software of every set supports so many practical options like internet connection, calendar, calculator, alarm, and convertor.Usually modern facility like cell phone has disadvantages especially concern with mental and physical healthy. Some scientists warn about using cell phone but people don’t take any notice. Statistically persons carry on a cell phone they have more stress than persons don’t have any cell phone. In addition, because of cell phone set options everyone may be independent on that. For example persons don’t memory any number.In my view, although modern devices have some disadvantages we can reduce them with improving public culture about that. Obviously every new technology needs new culture. If we had invented this technology, we would have entered norms of using that better than now.In conclusion, everyone uses cell phones with useful and useless features that can be have. Today’s in spite of people knowledge about cell phone problems, everyone try to have at least one set. So it’s better we focus on changing social culture instead of omitting cell phone.



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2 Responses so far.

  1. nonused says:

    No! do your own homework *****

  2. unoppugned says:

    I have copied and pasted your essay in my answer. This is the correct way (with all errors fixed).Nowadays, everybody has a cell phone. Many affairs can be arranged using one. On the other hand, some scientific reports advice people to use cell phone less and correctly. This device has some advantages and disadvantages in modern living.This device has a lot of advantages that people can use in their daily affairs. In spite of useful and on time calls, like emergency call, everybody can use other accessories that every cell phone set has. A good example is camera. In addition, software of every set supports so many practical options like Internet connection, calendar, calculator, alarm, and metric converter.Usually modern facility like cell phone has disadvantages especially concerned with mental and physical health. Some scientists warn people about using cell phone, but people don’t take any notice. Statistically, when people carry a cell phone, they have more stress than people that don’t have a cell phone. In addition, because of cell phone set options, everyone may be independent on that. For example, persons don’t memorize any phone numbers.In my view, although modern devices have some disadvantages, we can reduce them with improving public culture. Obviously, every new technology needs new culture. If we hadn’t invented this technology, we wouldn’t have increased the chance of living in a better way.In conclusion, everyone uses cell phones. They have useful and useless features. Today, in spite of people knowledge about cell phone problems, everyone should try to have at least one set. So, it’s better we focus on changing social culture instead of omitting the cell phone.