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Please check the grammar of my essay for school? Thanks! 10 pts. :)?





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‘Life isn’t always fair…Life isn’t fair, because if it was, there wouldn’t be people dying for no acceptable reasons every day, wars between countries wouldn’t exist, and a lot of people in this world wouldn’t have to suffer extreme poverty and starvation...but you have to do the best with what you’ve got.’Life may not be as easy as it is to others; there is no reason to feel sad about it. Not everyone is born rich, not everyone rides a shining car to school, not everyone eats extravagant food and wears luxurious clothes, but everyone has the chance to change the life they live through the power of choice. Choice and self-confidence is what you need to survive the challenge of life being unfair.Katniss Everdeen of The Hunger Games is a great example whom life has not been fair to. The Hunger Games is a morbid competition which takes place annually in the country of Panem. Every year, one boy and on girl between the ages of 12 and 18 is selected each of the twelve Districts as Tributes, who prepare for a week and then go into an outdoor arena to fight to the death. The event is nationally televised as mandatory for all citizens and the last living Tribute is declared as the Victor.When her little sister, Primrose Everdeen, was picked to join the games, Katniss volunteered to take her sister’s place. Instead of her sister, Katniss is the one to go into the arena with the other Tributes from other Districts and fight until she win or die. In this situation, Katniss’ life has been extremely unfair. Why? Once again, life is just cruelly unfair.When Katniss was in the arena, all she got was a bow and arrows. But instead of crying and dreading the fact that she was in the brink of death, she embraced her destiny with courage and determination to win the games. She used her weapon to hunt for food to survive and to protect herself. In this situation, we reflect through her character by realizing that instead of getting angry about how life is unfair to you, use what you have to survive.In the end, Katniss won the Hunger Games. But she couldn’t have done it without being courage. She could have been killed by the other Tributes if she didn’t think right. You are born with a brilliant mind, use it. Don’t let the unfairness of life get you, or else you’ll find yourself depressed and mad about everything.In addition to this, Katniss Everdeen teaches you that choices are just as important as the qualities you are born with. You can actually choose who or what you want to be. Rich people wouldn’t be rich forever if they wouldn’t invest. Some people have got it all; brains, money, luck, and happiness, other people just don’t have it. It is very unfair, but you can do nothing about it.If you want to accomplish something, you have to fight for it. I therefore believe that the statement ‘life isn’t always fair, but you have to do the best with what you’ve got’ is true. You may not have everything in life, but you have got a choice, and the most important thing is to be true to yourself and to never give up. Fight for who you want to be, don’t let the unfairness of life ruin you. Choose your own destiny.



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  1. didymate says:

    Here you go, I corrected it al. There wasn’t a lot of mistakes though:Life isn’t fair, because if it was, there wouldn’t be people dying for no acceptable reasons every day, wars between countries wouldn’t exist, and a lot of people in this world wouldn’t have to suffer extreme poverty and starvation…but you have to do the best with what you’ve got.’Life may not be as easy as it is to others; there is no reason to feel sad about it. Not everyone is born rich, not everyone rides a shining car to school, not everyone eats extravagant food and wears luxurious clothes, but everyone has the chance to change the life they live through the power of choice. Choice and self-confidence is what you need to survive the challenge of life being unfair.Katniss Everdeen of The Hunger Games is a great example whom life has not been fair to. The Hunger Games is a morbid competition that takes place annually in the country of Panem. Every year, one boy and on girl between the ages of 12 and 18 is selected each of the twelve Districts as Tributes, who prepare for a week and then go into an outdoor arena to fight to the death. The event is nationally televised as mandatory for all citizens and the last living Tribute is declared as the Victor.When her little sister, Primrose Everdeen, was picked to join the games, Katniss volunteered to take her sister’s place. Instead of her sister, Katniss is the one to go into the arena with the other Tributes from other Districts and fight until she win or die. In this situation, Katniss’ life has been extremely unfair. Why? Once again, life is just cruelly unfair.When Katniss was in the arena, all she got was a bow and arrows. Instead of crying and dreading the fact that she was in the brink of death, she embraced her destiny with courage and determination to win the games. She used her weapon to hunt for food to survive and to protect herself. In this situation, we reflect through her character by realizing that instead of getting angry about how life is unfair to you, use what you have to survive.In the end, Katniss won the Hunger Games. However, she could not have done it without being courage. She could have been killed by the other Tributes if she didn’t think right.You are born with a brilliant mind, so use it. Don’t let the unfairness of life get you, or else you’ll find yourself depressed and mad about everything.In addition to this, Katniss Everdeen teaches you that choices are just as important as the qualities you are born with. You can actually choose who or what you want to be. Rich people wouldn’t be rich forever if they wouldn’t invest. Some people have it all; brains, money, luck, and happiness, other people just don’t have it. It is very unfair, but you can do nothing about it.If you want to accomplish something, you have to fight for it. I therefore believe that the statement ‘life isn’t always fair, but you have to do the best with what you’ve got’ is true. You may not have everything in life, but you have a choice, and the most important thing is to be true to yourself and to never give up. Fight for who you want to be, don’t let the unfairness of life ruin you. Choose your own destiny.