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Can you edit and smooth out my essay? Please :) and thanks.?

I feel like my essay is really bumpy and needs to be tied together. These are just the 3 body paragraphs:The mocking bird symbolizes all the people who were mistreated, during the great depression. It represents the innocent. To kill a mocking bird means to destroy innocence. It means to inflict pain on something or someone who has never caused harm to anyone or anything. An example of a mocking bird is Arthur "Boo" Radley.Arthur "Boo" Radley is a mocking bird. He is a mocking bird because he’s never purposely harmed anyone but people have harmed him. He is often talked about and the citizens of Maycomb make up false rumors about him. Boo has never caused any harm to anyone, yet people still think that he’s a horrible person. It’s rumored that he’s a monster that is chained to his bed and has stabbed his father. They say he eats live animals and that he’s homicidal. These rumors are killing him slowly and destroying his innocence. The real boo is someone who’s generally good. He plays fun games and saves lives.When Jem and Scout got their rifles Atticus told them it’s a sin to kill a mocking bird. Later on Scout asked Miss Maudie Atkinson why it was on sin and she replied by saying "Mockingbirds don't do one thing but make music for us to enjoy. They don't eat up people's gardens, don't nest in corncribs, they don't do one thing but sing their hearts out for us. That's why it's a sin to kill a mockingbird." (Lee 90) When Atticus says the quote Its a sin to kill a mocking bird, he means it’s a horrible thing to destroy something so innocent . Miss Maudie later explains the quote by saying what it means to be innocent.

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  1. kalibak says:

    Nope, though I can correct some part of the essay…The mocking bird symbolizes all the people who were mistreated, during the great depression. It represents the innocent. [What is "it"? Revise the usages of subject]Good luck!