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So this is part of the essay I’m writing, does anyone disagree with me, and if so, why please?





Thanks so much for any help."...Language creates mind, which creates society:Seems like a complicated subject, and I’m sure it is; but here’s what we each can know just through simple everyday observation. The mind, simply defined, is where mental processing and storage takes place; it is similar, in some respects, to a computer’s central processing unit (CPU) and it’s RAM/ROM (memory). It perceives stimuli from our environment, and once perceived, the stimuli is then processed, and at some point a change is made in how you feel or view something as a result of that new stimuli experience.And so, when we hear someone say something, whether it be our friend, or a street sign, or an ad on T.V., that something, including the way it is said, enters into us, and is processed, and changes us; and so in some ways is now a part of us, permanently, to lesser or greater extents. And it is in this way that language creates mind. What we say and how we say it changes, well, maybe not everything, but at least lots of things; this is a large part of the subjective reality that we create; we create it through communicating with one another, through language; and of course, we are society. And too, we must remember that many people don’t really think about everything too much, and yet they often will repeat that which they’ve heard as if it is fact; and of course others will repeat it again and again, until, in some cases, as with some things, the mass of humanity holds unreasonable beliefs.Another way of saying language creates society, society creates mind, is to say that language creates thought, and thought creates reality. We are required, in the United States at least, to receive an education that must meet certain predetermined standards. For whatever reason, most people in this country send their children to public or private schools, rather than homeschooling them. Therefore, most people in America learn to think through the same lens; we are taught words and language; and all of the subjects, whether it be history, English, math, or physical education, in some way or another, describe and teach us about reality- through language, communicating and describing things to each other. The world is described to us as children far before we are old enough to experience many of the relevant (to the subject things ourselves). For example, we are taught to feel patriotic by saying the Pledge of Allegiance everyday in class, but how can a child possibly pledge allegiance to a country that it knows nothing about insofar as it operates? It is absurd; it is brainwashing, plain and clear. The children are being taught to view the world and feel certain ways about things far before they are actually capable of understanding those things or making decisions about them.It’s funny how children then have the capability to choose to be loyal to a country, yet they are too young to care for themselves, vote, drink, and have sex…So it’s like we’re born into this [black void type of deal] (EXPLAIN WHAT I MEAN BY THIS), and then we’re kind of swept up into this herding of the minds via forced education. And when you control the mind, you control the body, because people act based on their beliefs/experiences."



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  1. semiperimeter says:

    Interesting concept but you have to think about areas that speak the same language but have different standards relating to society, unless you mean language as a whole.Even then there is still a hole somewhere like does language necessarily create mind. If we didn’t have language could we still think? Cant visuals create mind, or touch, or smell. Language seems to specific. Some things i was thinking about is that fact that we are different and the same in a mutually exclusive sense is what creates society. The humans knack to wanna explore new things new people. When you think about its its weird how people seemingly similar can be so different and in that difference we set a sort of cask system in which some personality traits are more accepted based solely on our intuition and our judgement due to peoples actions. in that cask the person at the top of the pyramid sprinkles down his/hers ideas in a kind of trickle down kind of way. This in itself is a society but time is also a big factor in the sense creating a society. idk just spit balling