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HELP. Here is my claim for an argumentative essay I am doing in a college english class. Any suggestions?





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The United States should lower the drinking age, begin to teach responsible drinking, and strive to imitate non-temperance nation's perception of alcohol in order to promote its health benefits and minimize the alcohol related diseases and fatalities that are prevelant in society.I have information to back up everything that I am saying.Is there a better way to state my claim? Is the sentence easy to follow? Is it too lengthy? Also, if you have any arguments against lowering the drinking age, please provide them. I need to be able to rebuttal any counterarguments throughout my paper.Any suggestions will help! Thanks!



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2 Responses so far.

  1. ctisnet says:

    I need to see your whole introduction for this before I can tell you if the thesis fits into it right.

  2. audrone says:

    in order to promote its health benefits and minimize the alcohol related diseases and fatalities that are prevalent in society.The above argument contradicts your focus statement and nullifies the thesis. Think about rewording this part and using that content in your opposing view that you will show evidence of being incorrect.