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Can anyone help me by correcting my English essay ?





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It is about Increasing Burden of School Bags (because of English ) I want to change or remove first three sentences .India had been a colony of Britain for more than two centuries. Although, we have become independent in terms of our own constitution, but still we are slave mentally and psychologically our attire is our own but the person within it is motivated by the British ideology.As we all know that today it is an era of cutthroat competition. So we can't deny the rapidly increasing importance of English language. At present English has become a global language. In the hour of liberalization, privatization and globalization English language has rooted firmly its footings in the mind of each and every citizen of the world. In order to be successful English has become necessary to be learned by all.



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3 Responses so far.

  1. outlaugh says:

    “India was a colony of Britain for more than two centuries. Although we have become independent in terms of our own constitution, we are still mentally and psychologically enslaved. Our attire is our own, but the person within is still motivated by the British ideology.”"As we all know, today is an era of cutthroat competition.But we can’t deny the rapidly increasing importance of the English language. At present English has become a global language. In this time of liberalization, privatization, and globalization, the English language has firmly rooted its footings in the mind of each and every citizen of the world. In order to be successful, it has become necessary for English to be learned by all.”

  2. hughson says:

    This all needs a bit of work.Eliminate these unnecessary expressions:”As we all know.”"So we can’t deny.”This is simply wrong:”In the hour of liberalization.”Hour?This connection makes no sense:”Psychologically our attire.”And I have no idea what this means:”increasing Burden of School Bags”(BTW, I would indicate you’re speaking of economic liberalization unless you’re writing in an economics course. Liberalization is usually taken in the political sense, at least in the US.)I also have a difficult time seeing the connection between what you deem “cutthroat competition” and the use of English. You seem to want to say:”Because of cuttrhoat competition, English has rapidly grown in importance.”:

  3. sDEVICE says:

    A lot of the spelling rules are also not consistent like with the word “pretty” for example . Phonics rules are that the “e” in this word should be a short sound. This is not true for the letter “e” at all. IN this word, the letter “e” has the sound of the short “i”. Why not spell this word “pritty” as it is pronounced? This is just one such example and then you have all of the silent sounds. What’s the real deal with all of that ?People who speak English as their first language are not necessarily aware which sound for A they are using when they use or read a word they have known . Of course, they are literate, whether they can explain the phonics system or not, because literate means capable of reading