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How to start out my Personal Statement?

I'm writing my personal statement from the UC Berkeley freshman application prompt, which is as follows: "Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations."I want to study biology/zoologyI know what I'm going to write about, but I'm stuk on how to start it. I don't want to be cliche, but I also don't want to be boring.

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  1. coldhearted says:

    personal statement usually includes the following. You need a good attention grabber. In general you want your essay to follow this order: Paragraph 1-2 attention grabber. Think of an experience in your life that really showcases who you are. Be detailed. Discuss something significant in your life. It could be anything. Or discuss why you want to be in your profession or what story inspired you to study what you are studying. Paragraph 3-4. Highlight your academics: GPA, classes. What skills you learned in class that will help in succeeding in college. Awards and honors that you have received. Sports or clubs that you are in. Paragraph 5. Jobs that you have had that relate to your major? Any other things about yourself that you want to include Paragraph 6: Conclusion. In this conclusion you may want to re-state your main qualifications. You can also include any of the following statements: My goal is…. I deserve this scholarship because…. I will edit it for you if you email it to me

  2. instonement says:

    will you edit mine? Report Abuse