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College Admission Essay-> Road Trip?

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They said they want to know about me, and write anything. just make it interesting. do you think i could write about the cross country road trip i took this summer? and how i want to travel?

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Is this an INTERESTING/ GOOD admission essay introduction paragraph? help answer?

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Is this an effective intro paragraph?PLEASE HELP EDIT/ COMMENT/ SUGGEST information. THANK YOU! )) The floor was buried under a sea of shattered glass and broken pieces of wood. Overturned furniture and empty drawers littered the corner of every room. A splintered chair scraped against the door as I entered the house. Suddenly, I looked […]

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I wrote my college admission essay, can you check it, it would be a really big help to me?

The summer of 2008 my mother passed away. It was a hard thing to comprehend, I didn’t understand how someone could pass away at the age of 45, and out of all people to pass away… it had to be my mother? How could this be? She was so young. I thought it was usually […]

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Putting an admission for UCF?

OK, I’m sort of confused with this whole admission thing. I know I should of put in admissions around nov and dec but I was doing an online class that I had to take due to becoming homeless and being forced to move before the end of the first semester of my sophomore year. I […]

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A question about admission essay?

I know that writing personal things in an admission essay can help them to understand you better, but I’ve heard that writing about very personal experiences can almost make them feel “sorry” for you and want to help you in the best way possible. Some people write about being homeless, being poor, have 1 parent, […]

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NYU Admission Chances?

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NYU (college of arts and science) Biology Majorwrote some really killer essays and I really emphasized on my diverse cultural background, if thats a good thing? (if you have time to read em u can drop me ur email)Im pretty sure I got some good recommendations, and I also got a recommendation from a neurosurgeons […]

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Question about how admission officers consider the UC personal statements?

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When I first wrote my two personal statements, they were pretty average and did not exemplify my best writing skills, and after being told this by very honest source I decided to rewrite them. However, looking back on it after already having sent them in, I am kind of worried that my second one veered […]

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So, I am a senior in HS. NEED TO KNOW ABOUT ADMISSION TO DEPAUL.?

Okay, so I am a senior in high school and I wanted to know if it is possible to possibly get accepted to DePaul University if my previous years haven’t been so hot. Is it possible if I do amazing my senior year? I am a really smart guy and I know it, I just […]

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Admission essay question ?

my essay starts off by mentioning an everlasting gobstopper, my teacher graded it and said i should explain in the essay what a gobstopper is. but i’ve tried everything and it doesnt seem to fit right. it’s like giving a random definition in the essay. she told me that during admissions, when they read my […]

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Would anybody be willing to give feedback on a college admission essay?

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Millions of little girls dream of being movie stars when they grow up. They imagine themselves being followed by adoring fans and nosy photographers as they strut through the streets of Los Angeles in their $500 pair of Jimmy Choos. I, however, rarely spent my time dreaming of fame and wealth, because I knew that […]

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