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Will you review my college admissions essay (its not that long)?

The prompt is basically asking how we would bring diversity, blah, blah, blah, we’ve all see them before… I would appreciate BRUTAL honesty. Im afrais I might be coming off a little strong and I really dont want to offend anyone. I’m applying to some really high-class schools so this essay needs to be perfect, […]

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Could this be a decent college admissions essay?

This is just a rough draft…I can’t make it much longer, I’m writing it for the common app and there’s a 500 word limit. But does this seem like it’s a good essay? Could it get me into college? Should I mention sob story stuff (how my sister has a mental disability, my mother had […]

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College admissions extracurricular/volunteer activities?

Ive been out of school for a few years and am looking in to applying to colleges. In the extracurricular/volunteer essay sections. Do they want me to write about extracurricular activities I had while in high school or do they wanna know about my E.C./volunteering activities I do now?

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I didn’t put double spaces between the paragraphs on my college admissions essay like it said to do?

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… and the indentations didn’t show up so you can’t really see where the paragraphs end and start. I hit submit before I saw that and now I can’t go back and fix it. Will they still review my essay? Will I be penalized for not following directions? It was on a UF application if […]

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Do college essays and extracurricular activities affect admissions to UCs largely?

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I have about a 3.5 gpa and 1600 SAT… haven’t written that great of an essay nor done much in the community.

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Are historically black college’s more lenient on admissions?

So, 2 questions. Are historically black colleges more lenient on admissions? Like if I only went up to geometry when they require algebra 2? If I wrote an emotionally moving admissions essay? Also can I transfer to like long beach state or Los Angeles state from a historicay black college? Would i have to get […]

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How do i start the college admissions essay?

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i have nothing unique about myself lol nothing ever really happend. i want to be a doctor but i dont know if i can write my essay on that. i really dont know what to write about pleasee help me thanks

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Okay for an admissions essay would this catch your interest?

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When i was 9 years old i almost died,and ever since i have never thought of life the same.It is supposed to be an essay about something in your life that changed your way of thinking or a meaningful change in your life,but would that capture your interest or should i try another saying another […]

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My edgy essay for college admissions?

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Ok totally weird I know but I wish to write a college admission essay about how I am similar to Holden Caulfield in the Catcher in the Rye. That’s not the weird part but i guess i needed to ease into it. I am much like Holden in many ways and I’ve known this for […]

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Help editing my admissions essay (short)?

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help with editing of my high school admissions essay,’ the concl. pleaseThe best advice I have ever received was from my dad when I was eight , when he told me to “always be myself.” At the time, I did not find this to be very useful, but as I grew older and fought through […]

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