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Help me create a better introduction sentence for my midterm :)?

The essay is on the “realism” genre in literature. the 3 stories i’m comparing are about the struggles in the civil rights movement. My best introductory sentence so far is “real life is a struggle” ..pathetic I know, but can you please help me get a better introduction, just like the first sentence or two

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How to be better organized for my classes (class description)?

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Okay, the second semester is approaching, and I want to do better than I did the first semester. (Not that I did bad for the second. I have the ability to be very organized, but then I just don’t keep up with it. So I’m going to describe my classes, and you tell me if […]

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Please help me correct grammar or rewrite to a better way of a part of my essay?

According to Dr. Thiemann states in Dionne’s article that we can gain respect by impressing others while esteem we always have it. Self-respect is a positive view of self that is earned by accomplishment; it is when we conduct ourselves in a productive way.We only have it as much of that as we can earn. […]

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How to write this sentence better?

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“Is there a movie where it doesn’t have something in common with some other film?”I know it sounds horrible but how can I write it differently?This is an intro to my essay (compare/contrast 3 movies) not my thesis. My thesis is different.

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Is this a good begining for a process essay?and ending?plzz help if not good tell me wat could be better!?

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How to make Edible Dough Does your mom ever say, “Don’t Play with your food!” well now you can! Now there is a way, by making your own edible play dough! It is an easy fun way! There are just 12 simple steps.ENDING!find a place where you wont make any mess. Create your figures and […]

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Does this Essay sound ok, what would make it better?

When it comes to the happiness of children who are in foster care special precautions need to be taken. Special needs children are the older children in foster care that the Family Service workers feel will be hard to place in a home permanently. When children are placed into foster care they go through a […]

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Who is a better orator Bill Gates or Steve Jobs?

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I need to do a large essay (8-10 pages) on a good orator. I am not very interested in politics and so I decided to do either Bill Gates or Steve Jobs (if you know anyone else interesting who is not a politician I’ll take it into consideration). Which of these people is more interesting […]

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Should soldiers receive better medical treatment than ordinary UK citizens?

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I am not offering up my opinion, I am writing an essay and would appreciate your opinions. Please provide evidence wherever possible. Thank you!

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What’s A Better Word For ‘to do’?

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Im Doing An Essay. So Whats A More Sophisticated Word?

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How can you put this in a better more expanded way?

I am found nearly all over the world.How would you put that using more vocabulary and such?I am writing an expository essay as if I where a flower.

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