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Please Read My College Essay?

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ok just comment, please ignore any grammar mistakes, as those can be fixed, if you find the quality of the first paragraph differ from the rest, its ok because my tutor edited that part lol, and the conclusion is not finished. Timidity and apprehensiveness, when not fully understood or recognized, can be interpreted as arrogance […]

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How is my intro for my college essay?

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I wrote in pretty quick so I’m sure it’s not perfect. Please just let me know if it sounds pretty original and gets the point across. The prompt is to talk about an obstacle in our life and its circumstances. I want to talk about how my self image has been a large obstacle. It […]

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Can anyone help me with my college personal essay?

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I am using the Common Application and I need major help writing my personal essay. I don’t really like the topics that they give as options so I picked Topic of my choice. I would like to write about my involvement in theatre and how it has influenced me but I have no idea where […]

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Can anyone help reviewing my college application essay?

I’m currently doing my college application and I need someone to reviewing my essay. Since English is my second language, I had hard time finding any typos and grammar errors by myself. Here’s my essay. Thank you:)My family moved from South Korea to Seattle back in 2002. My parents were so happy that I finally […]

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Can you help edit my college essay? Any help is appreciated!?

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Why did you choose to apply to UCF?#3 – It is April 2009. I am on a college tour sponsored by my High School and have stopped at the University of Central Florida. My first impression is, “Wow! This campus is enormous!” Once I get a grip on myself, I realize that the campus is […]

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Do you have to write in cursive during timed essay exams in college?

Or are they fine with legible print? Oh and if anyone has any tips on timed essay exams, I’d love to hear them. Thanks!

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Opening line of my college essay?

I’m in the process of writing my college essay. It will be about the self-realization that my actions affect more people than just myself, and the events that led up to that. I’m having trouble thinking of an attention grabbing line..could you help me out?

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College Admission Essay-> Road Trip?

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They said they want to know about me, and write anything. just make it interesting. do you think i could write about the cross country road trip i took this summer? and how i want to travel?

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What are my chances of getting accepted to the University of Maryland College Park?

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Freshman Schedule:1.Honors English 1- A+2. french 1-A+3. Honors Bio- A+4. Honors World History-A+5. Honors Geometry- ASophomore Schedule:1. Honors English 10-A+2. Honors Algebra 2- A+3. Honors Chemistry-A+4. Honors European History- A+5. French 2-A+Junior Schedule:1. AP Physics-A2. AP English 11- A+3. french 3- A+4. AP U.S History-A+5. AP Trigonometry-ASenior Schedule:1. AP Calculus-A+2. Ap English 12- A+3. French […]

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Can Someone help me with this College Application Essay?

I have to write a paper on why I chose this particular school. I have Ideas and I want to include talk on the school slogan “Knowledge that works”.Any suggestions?

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