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Is this inverted thesis statement for an essay I’m writing too confusing?

Because it is hypocritical that the government trusts 18-year-old adolescents with bigger responsibilities than drinking, that soldiers under the age of twenty-one are prohibited while risking their lives, and that the effects of alcohol are no more harmful than those that result from smoking cigarettes, the minimum drinking age should be lowered to eighteen.

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