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How can I improve my expository essay? Please help me make changes to it so that it sounds good(:?

I’m writing an expository essay on an inventor and I chose the person who invented coca-cola. My thesis statement is:The world-famous soda beverage, Coca-Cola, was invented by pharmacist John Stith Pemberton. It all started at a little pharmacy in which he worked. Is that good? How can I make that better? My first/introductory paragraph is:The […]

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Which Sentence Sounds More fluent For My Essay?

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So much so that in the future, he wanted to study at Juilliard to become a professional guitarist. Norah supported Paul’s musical aspiration. However, David did not, believing that Paul had greater potential than to build a musical future. So much so that in the future, he wanted to study at Juilliard to become a […]

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How can I make my thesis sounds better?

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I am working on my essay about the book “A Separate Peace”This is my thesis statement…At the beginning of the story, the boys are eager to join the military services; however, they later learn about the actual war, reality, and its effects, and nothing is the sameafter that realization. I use “and” 2 times in […]

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How to fake vomit sounds?

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i need to fake sick (didnt finish my essay). how do i fake vomit without actually doing it. i just need to know how too make the sounds not liek how to make it look like vomit

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*very urgent* Can some one tell me if this is essay sounds good so far?

does the introduction state the thesis well. can you start an introduction with a question? The Media Made Me Do ItHas society really become that shallow minded to blame Television for the justification of the violent crimes being committed? No one wants to take the blame for anything, not even parents want to take the […]

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Trying to speak about satire in a media studies essay, which sounds best?

this is for higher media and i havent ever spoken about satire before so everything i write sounds so weird and wrong, its a word that ive never really placed in a sentence.could i say;using satire we aimed our show to appeal to a later night time audience? it sounds so weird/wrong just to dump […]

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Is this sentence weird, it sounds weird to me?

It was the unusual song structure of Jesus of Suburbia that attracted me to this song, as a song to analyse for this essay. I’m writing an essay, and it’s the opening sentence. It just sounds a bit weird to me. But that could just be me, trying to procrastinate so I won’t write any […]

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Can you read my essay for english and tell me if it sounds good (its not that long)?

have to write a scene from the book to kill a mocking bird from Boo’s perspectiveAnother day in my house wondering… what will the day bring me…what will it not. Being alone in this house for years makes me numb. I don’t know what its like to have friends, company, or feel loved. Every minute […]

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Essay about Othello – Can anyone just tell me if this sounds okay so far?

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Our question was – How does Iago destroy Othello’s faith in Desdemona?And heres my answer so far, can you tell me if it sounds okay?Othello is a play about love, and jealousy. Throughout the play, Iago plants the idea of Desdemona being unfaithful to Othello, Iago is only able to destroy Othello’s faith in Desdemona […]

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