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Is this inverted thesis statement for an essay I’m writing too confusing?

Because it is hypocritical that the government trusts 18-year-old adolescents with bigger responsibilities than drinking, that soldiers under the age of twenty-one are prohibited while risking their lives, and that the effects of alcohol are no more harmful than those that result from smoking cigarettes, the minimum drinking age should be lowered to eighteen.

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How to start out my Personal Statement?

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I’m writing my personal statement from the UC Berkeley freshman application prompt, which is as follows: “Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.”I want to study biology/zoologyI know what I’m going to write about, but […]

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Essay thesis statement HELP!?

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Hey everyone, I’m having trouble developing a thesis for my psych essay. here were the instructions given:”develop a thesis statement pertaining to the relationship between puberty and delinquency/antisocial behaviour” I’m thinking something along the lines of antisocial behaviour and suicide?please help thanks! any idea is welcomehope youre all havin a good night -CA

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How to start off an essay with an eye catching statement about the author book of Matthew?

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*My argument is that, Matthew the apostle is not the author of matthew. I just want a statement that will catch my teacher’s attention. Lately, Ive been using questions, but I think its getting old, well mine are. please and thankyou.

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Can somoene help me with my thesis statement?

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I am writing an analytical essay comparing and contrasting the two plays Odeipus Rex and A Raisin in the Sun. I just cannot think of a thesis statement. Can anyone help me out?

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Is this a good thesis statement?

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Both Rome and Han China were well-organized bureaucracies that went through political, economic, and social hardships throughout their reign.I’m new at writing essays and we I have an AP World History essay test tomorrow. The question is about comparing and contrasting the Roman Empire and the Han dynasty.How good of a statement is this? How […]

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Of Mice And Men Thesis Statement?

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I need a conclusion for my essay and I need to relate it to my thesis statement… It is George could have been justified for shooting Lennie as a result of George saving him from possible torture and stopping something comparable from happening once more, but it could be opposed that George should have tried […]

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I need help writing a thesis statement?

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my essay topic is food safety and my three points are1. receiving and storing food2. preparing and serving food3. cleaningbut whenever i try to write one it looks so simple and doesn’t flow, could you help me please?

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Thesis statement for much ado about nothing essay?

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i’m confused how to answer this question as a thesis statementWhat techniques has Shakespeare used to construct his characters in Much Ado About Nothing?if someone could help me/show me how to structure/tell me what to write in it, that would be amazing and i would be forever grateful. thanks ~ 10 points up for grabs

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How do i word a thesis statement on the tax cuts and tax rises?

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as a responsible citizen write an essay about tax cuts and tax raises

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